ANZAC Narritve

 W.A.L.T:Organize our ideas into order

I learned that Writting about ANZAC is more fun then things other then that.

I achieved my goal because my Writting is in order.My best sentences are.We were a bit worried about being shot or bombed down and having a MASSIVE     and    HUGE crash land..It was a sad sad day 4 weeks later we had Bill and Bob die everyone in hawaie went to the biggest ceromony for  funarols in history of the world..Me and James did our best not to cry but it was worthless we were to sad about losing our friends that we won world war 6 and could of for world war 7 but we will  let them lie in the most peace and harmany eneyone in the world has ever made come true..Someone called Bruce(Who is in the ordeince)said that we will be fine to go and try do world war 7 with just Me (Who is Tom Riddle)and James wich got Me and James so angry that we killed him and there was tons and tons of blood and human meat all over the place but we were a but gultie about killing him.
Next time I will try & write more then 7 whole pages on a crombook.

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